The Perfect Investment Pitch Sounds Like This …

So, why do most investment pitches start with, “And my company is the next Apple or Facebook”?

Everyone loves a good story. Some of our favorite stories are from movies we watched as children, and they all have the same ending: “… and they lived happily ever after.”

We often know the ending before a movie even begins, so why do we watch them? We watch to see the journey. The journey that started with a struggle or a problem is finally resolved as the prince and princess ride off into the sunset.

So why, then, do most investment pitches start with, “And my company is the next Apple or Facebook”? I mean, that’s the fairytale ending, isn’t it? That our startup is the next multibillion-dollar company?


What’s Your Startup Story?

Both Apple and Facebook didn’t start out as multibillion-dollar companies. Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak built their first product, the Apple I, on the mere vision that computers would be used by consumers — at a time when computers were exclusively used by businesses. Through innovation and iteration, Apple evolved into the company we know today, but the journey was not done without its struggles.

If you want to understand the full picture of Apple’s struggles, read the nearly 600-page biography of Steve Jobs written by Walter Isaacson.

Besides, as an early-stage startup, there are no great revenue numbers to put on a slide deck – only predictions. You may have a business plan, but it could change tomorrow.


However, what you do have is a story.

You have experienced a problem or seen a need. Now you are actively working to provide a solution to that problem, or fill that need. Not only that, there have been bumps in the road thus far and there will be even more in the future. So, your determination and passion to get the job done needs to shine.

For example, my company provides expiration date management software to the grocery industry, but my investment pitch never starts out with, “I made Date Check Pro, and it will make millions!” Instead, I start out by describing how I used to work in a grocery store. I checked far too many expiration dates on far too many cereal boxes, and realized there had to be a better way.

The goal of starting with the story is to show that you are personally connected to the problem you are looking to solve, and that you are the right person for the job. Knowing this, investors are more likely to connect with you, the entrepreneur.

For example, one of our investors — Peter Layton, a former partner at Goldman Sachs turned serial entrepreneur and angel investor — told me recently, “I invest in people first and the idea second. I want to hear the entrepreneur’s experience with the problem they are looking to solve, their passion to solve it, and how they plan to do so. If the story is good, I am more likely to invest since I know there is a good founder behind the idea.”

So before your next investor pitch, remember these key tips:

  • Share your story instead of pitching your company.
  • Keep it short; six minutes or less.
  • Since you’re running an early-stage startup you won’t have perfect financial projections or a fireproof business plan. Instead, include your plan to grow the company into your story, but be open to suggestions.
  • Practice, practice, practice. Yes it’s a cliché, but you don’t write your story in one sitting. How could you tell it perfectly on the first try?
  • Remember: You’re not “pitching,” just telling a story. Relax!


Andrew Hoeft is the founder of Pinpoint Software, Inc. His company has created Date Check Pro, expiration date management software that allows for proactive management of inventory and will be launching a second product late 2013. He is a co-founder of StartupMKE, a founding member of StartupWI, and a senior at the University of Wisconsin-Whitewater studying entrepreneurship. In addition, his company is a member of the Gener8tor accelerator program which provides numerous resources to start-up technology companies.


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